ABOUT THE POEM: Music is a poem about creation after meaning has thinned out. It contrasts the old mythology of art-money, bands, studios, sacrifice-with the present moment, where making a song is trivial in time but not in consequence. The ease of creation does not bring fulfillment; it sharpens isolation. The speaker owns the work instantly, yet has no shared world to receive it. The poem moves from factual observation into existential exposure. “My creation, looping alone” frames art as self-contained, echoing in a vacuum. The traveler motif introduces a desire for escape, but not hope-only removal. Grief here is quiet, incurable, and bureaucratic, “kills without a grave.” Social judgment is blunt: shallow survival versus deep extinction. No moral correction follows. The poem refuses balance. The image of the security guard at an empty gate captures the final state-vigil without purpose, responsibility without community. Music becomes the last interlocutor, stripped of romance. It does not heal or inspire. It diagnoses. The closing line rejects transcendence and replaces it with clinical truth. This is not art as salvation, but art as witness-clear-eyed, unsentimental, and alone.
Title – Music
A fortune-real money too- band drama, studio fights: that’s what a first album once demanded. Now it takes five minutes flat.
I already have my pretty little baby to listen to- my creation, looping alone.
O distant traveler, take me too. Take me with you- My shadow walks alone; no one pursues. You gave me grief that kills without a grave. I died alive, no soul to save. My heart renounced this hollow game- carry me far from all the shame, carry me far from all the shame.
What worth is this world that toys with pain and breath? The shallow win; the deep face death.
Take me with you- I’m left alone.
No love has returned from the past. I know this. I listen to what I made, like a security guard at an empty gate. No one inside, no one outside- the world never arrived.
I talk to music; it answers like a mentor: You are sick.
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